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As a first, we reviewed Satabdi Bannerjee’s poem “Quarantine Hopes.”
My days are gloomy balloons
Filling in the unsettled air
Much to anxiety over
How shall I find my way?
The quarantine thoughts
Are imposing sway
In recurrent echoes
I spend the day.
I look at the sky
The clouds floating by
I sit around my window sill
gaze them pass by.
One spring has gone by,
Another is waiting
I comfort myself in my present
Till I
leap across tomorrow
I
scribble my diary every day
In wait for a longer spring
I promise myself a new day
Where all is merry down the bay
The news the noise
The mundane the voice
All crackle my soundings tonight
As I
awake to new dawn now
Filling my gloomy balloons
Eventual as May.
The Review
All of us, including the dictionary, are going to remember 2020 as the year of the Big (-ger than the known) C, which introduced the word ‘quarantine’ into all the languages of the world, not to mention our beings.
Satabdi has written this poem about the indelible mark the pandemic has left on our collective psyche, of fear, of “unsettling” doubt about finding our "way out" of the dilemmas that it has imposed on us.
Titled “Quarantine Hopes,” the poem uses common, everyday sensory imagery, conflicting with its more common usage. For eg, she likens the days of the quarantine period to balloons, an image usually used to express a lightness, the buoyancy of hope, rising high above despondency. But here the ‘gloomy’ balloons are filled with ‘unsettling air’ that creates anxiety. This is an interesting experiment.
Similarly, “clouds floating by” would commonly denote a carefree, unpredictable whimsicality, but here it suggests a vacant passage of time wherein one spring has been spent gazing at them from her seat on the window sill, waiting for the new dawn.
As she waits for a day to come when “all is merry down the bay” with routine, mundane news, she is filled with expectations that “crackle” her instincts, filling up her “gloomy balloon” days with all the promises of May.
For Satabdi, thus hope springs eternal. She scribbles in her diary every day, waiting, comforting herself in the present, sure of making the “leap across tomorrow.”
While doing so, she carries her readers along. Having heard the echoes of “quarantine thoughts” in our own lives, we feel grateful for the hope she provides and look forward to the new dawn now.
thank you so much for your valuable insight.......I am humbled to see such a delightful painting shape up in my inward eye over such descriptive review and expression of my random musings.....my kind regards and thank you for making this honest attempt
ReplyDeleteYou are most welcome Satabdi -- that was the whole purpose of the post.. to make an honest attempt at reviewing the poem. Your 'random musings,' as you modestly refer to them, were/are the voice of every human being during these testing times. And thanks for comparing the review to 'a delightful painting' -- it was your writing that inspired it!
DeleteSo well written.. at times I wonder if the poet herself put as much thought into her words as you have!
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